Part two the news

 …After school they entered universities but they still loved each other that’s why they lived together in a small room which they rented.

 Some documents from Melinda’s diary

 The 15th of December, Tuesday
 
 I felt myself bad yesterday. During one of our lectures I fainted. I opened my eyes in a hospital. I saw Jack, he set near my bed. He took my hand, kissed it and said: “You scared me very much! Please, never do it in future!”
 Mr. Black, my doctor, let me to go home but he asked to come again on Friday.

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 The 18th of December, Friday
 
 9.00 am Today I must go to the hospital but I don’t know for what. I feel better and I don’t need doctor’s help. Maybe I can stay at home? No, I have to go!
 9.00 pm Oh, my God! The doctor said wonderful news to me – I shall be a mother!!!!!!!!! I can’t believe it!!! What’s a pity that Jack has gone to his mother! But when he comes back on Monday I’ll tell him everything!!!!!!


Рецензии
TYPO - "I saw Jack, he sAt (= 'was sitting' IMHO is more appropriate & emotional here) near my bed."
Please, never do it AGAIN!
REGARDS, but no trace of sophisticated writing here :)

Сергей Лузан   01.10.2005 12:33     Заявить о нарушении