A very personal letter For the One

We were talking. And somebody was telling us about Africa.
And I was looking in your face as usual. And then they mentioned savannah
And (was it not my dream?) I saw 3-second hesitation in your eyes
And then your eyes kind of wandered around the room and you gave me a glance, and made kind of nod or whatever, as if I was to approve your hidden thought and and there was kind of a smile hidden in your lips..
Well, I like thinking about that moment and about you, and the way you did let me see you knew some funny stupid things about me though may be you didn't wish to show
Its just sometimes I think of you, that glance, and now I just try to change something - to apologize, and to say........
.....Please forgive me. May be I was wrong in something and may be even in everything.
 I hope you understand, etc.
Just in case you come here to get to know one more funny stupid thing about me


I am not sure that I'm in the right mood to read it. However, I appreciate this short-short story of yours, since it made me admit I did something, unless everything, wrong. And that's just one little funny stupid thing you know about me. Not that I'm tortured by remorse and shame clinging to my personality, but there's something I'd love to change, and I wanna change it in me, in me in the first and the only place.

Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortunes
Or to take arms against a sea of troubles
And by opposing end them..."

I omitted the first line on purpose, and you know what's in it.=)

Bye-bye and good luck to you.=)

P.S. Was it right thing to drop the subject of Africa?=)

Евгений Орел   26.11.2010 16:36     Заявить о нарушении
Oh, thank you! It is such a rare case when one gets a reply on this site... Actually the question "to be or not to be" was not the one, but you are almost right - the question was "to be or not to be in love" :-)
Strangely enough the answer not to be in love in that very case turned out to be the right one...


Come back again. It is lovely to get your reply!

Good luck!

Savanna   26.11.2010 17:33   Заявить о нарушении
Thanks for your reply. You bet, I'll be back.=) I can see a lot of good stuff to explore in your page, and the things I've already checked out are enjoyable big-time. In particular, I can single out that great collection of u-tube links to celebrities interviews.

The only thing I need to figure out at this point is how to transfer points to your login, as a humble token of my appreciation of your great efforts. But I'll make it alright I guess, since I am a little above the dummy level as a computer user.=)

Take care,

Евгений Орел   26.11.2010 17:56   Заявить о нарушении
I did it!=) As much as I could afford.=)


Евгений Орел   26.11.2010 18:00   Заявить о нарушении
Thank you so so much!!! Now I can afford one more ad of the text with great writers video links!

I wish you very lucky evening and many lucky days!

Savanna   01.12.2010 19:58   Заявить о нарушении
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