After the sunset they all realised how nites cold might be. they tried to make their life hotter, they tried to love the world around but not all of them got enough sage not to go insane as it all was just a severin line in the cold nite time. soon they will hear those odd screams of absolutely forsaken birds endeavourin the new senses of this life after the sunset. as the gulls will feel the coldnes of the tender clouds jusst touchin slightly the waters of the life ocean.
pray, pray and soon we shall meet. we shall meet with HIM. His Infinit Master. Noo matter how they accept it, they know what to do.
Eto
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Too many typos (or deviations?) - I dunno intentional or not.
After the sunset they all realised how nites (*nights*) cold might be. they tried to make their life hotter, they tried to love the world around but not all of them got enough sage not to go insane as it all was just a severin line in the cold nite time. soon they will hear those odd screams of absolutely forsaken birds endeavourin*'* the new senses of this life after the sunset. as the gulls will feel the coldnes*s* of the tender clouds jusst touchin slightly the waters of the life ocean.
pray, pray and soon we shall meet. we shall meet with HIM. His Infinit*e* Master. Noo matter how they accept it, they know what to do.
Сергей Лузан 09.12.2006 11:06 • Заявить о нарушении
After the sunset they all realised how nites (*nights*) cold might be. they tried to make their life hotter, they tried to love the world around but not all of them got enough sage not to go insane as it all was just a severin line in the cold nite time. soon they will hear those odd screams of absolutely forsaken birds endeavourin*'* the new senses of this life after the sunset. as the gulls will feel the coldnes*s* of the tender clouds jusst touchin slightly the waters of the life ocean.
pray, pray and soon we shall meet. we shall meet with HIM. His Infinit*e* Master. Noo matter how they accept it, they know what to do.
Сергей Лузан 09.12.2006 11:06 • Заявить о нарушении
Dear Sergey,
Nite-American, night-British
all the other stuffs are done up to my imaginatinos
with the best regards
Mr.Levon
P.S. by the way what u feel of these stuffs?ї
Левон Инглиш 11.12.2006 05:41 Заявить о нарушении
Nite-American, night-British
all the other stuffs are done up to my imaginatinos
with the best regards
Mr.Levon
P.S. by the way what u feel of these stuffs?ї
Левон Инглиш 11.12.2006 05:41 Заявить о нарушении