Hurricane

Selena was at home. She wants to meet with her best friend Tasha.
- Tasha goes out!
- Now where are you?
- I’m at home. Come in.
- O.k.
Tasha came to Selena.
- How are you?
- Fine. And you? What are we doing?
- Are we going to beach?
- Let’s drop in at Tania’s and Olga’s before going?
- O.k.
They dropped in at girls and went to the beach. Soon they went to Selena’s home. And they arranged party for four girls. Hurricane began. Their house transferred to Denver. Suddenly Olga looked out in window
- Strange.
- What with are you?
- We were in LA and now we are…I don’t understand.
- I’ll see.
Sel go out and see Selicia and Nick walking.
- Selli, what are you doing here?
- Sel, we wanted you to answer this question. You are in Denver.
- I was in LA with my friend. Come in.
Selicia and Nick came home.
- Selli, you know everybody. Introduce us to him.
Selicia has done it. The party to be continuing …the storm begins and while they were sleeping they transferred to suburb LA. Tash’s friend went for a walk and saw their house.
- Lera hi
- What are you doing here?
- We were at my home, later we were in Denver and now we are here.
- O.k. I’m Lera.
- Olga, Selena, Selicia, Tania and Nick.
- I’m glad to see you
- So are we.
The storm began again and again they were transferred to Manhattan.

***
- Hello Allia.
- Hi Ann. We will go to McDonalds.
- O.k. tomorrow at 10 a.m. you have called Ollia.
The girls met and came in Mc.
- Can I help you?
- Please two cheeseburgers, strawberries McFloorry, nougat McFloorry, two orange juice and tea.
- Thanks for order.
- Can I help you?
- Please cheeseburger, nougat McFloorry, orange juice, fridge with sour-sweet sauce and coffee.
- Thanks for order.
Girl ate and went. They saw house and came in inside.
- Hi.
- Hi Allia what are you doing here?
- We came to Mc went out and we saw your house. We came in here.
- I’ll introduce us to you…Allia, Ollia, Ann, Tasha, Olga, Selicia, Tania, Lera and Nick.
- I’m glad to see you
- So are we.
Also at the time the strong wind blow their house landed in front of Elision
They went out of house.
- Where are we?
- I don’t know.
- We need to explore these places.
- I see the backer-shop…
All came in to the shop.
- Hello. Here you are?
- Hello.
- What is the city?
- Elision. You are new people take away from here.
- What do you happen?
- Our city occupied Pallantine.
- What does he want?
- We don’t know.
- We will rescue your city. Do you have weapons?
- No.
- We need those things.
Selena showed on light sabers. They received what they want and went.
- I, Tasha, Selicia and Nick come in that building. Others stayed here.
- But…
- Not but…It is my house and I am boss now. Understand me?
- Yes boss.
Sel asked way.
- Could you tell me the way to that building?
- Take the third on the right and go to straight on.
- Thank you.
Selena as if know all. This is your dreams! She doesn’t sleep. They hit in trap. They were in prison.
- Sel we don’t understand.
- Listen to me always.
Selena invited guards.
- Dear, why are we here?
- I don’t dear. My name is Jerdon.
- Jerdon, why are we here?
- Are you Jedi?
- No. we are people, ordinary people.
Guard went out.
- Selli. Answer to me. We need change our names.
- I’ll be Minerva.
- I’ll be Rod.
- I’ll be Leti.
- I’ll be Margo.
- Tsss.
- What are your names?
- Minerva. Rod. Leti. Margo.
- You need to Imperator.
- O.k. Mr…..
- Norber.
- How much guards have your boss?
- 6. I and Jerdon, two are in the man prison and two are in woman prison.
Selena got ill. Guard went.
- I will tell. We only listen to me. - They came to Pallantine.
***
- Norb why are you alone?
- Mina gets ill and all help her.
- You must be with them.
- They come in.
Turn up SOS.
- I want to see you prisoners.
- Why?
- I need it.
- O.k.
Sel hands her friend messages. «We need killing al guards».They went to plan. But…
- I don’t guard.
- What?
- I called you here. I don’t Norber. My name is Nefritues. I lived on my planet but “my boss” destroyed my planets. I change name and wait.
- We help you.
They killed Pallantine and flight. Norb become husband to Ann.
The end.


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Gosh, what the hell is this about? OK, skip the plot and the idea (I assume I didn't get it) but the language tremendously reminds of the 5th grade school textbooks. Think twice of working it out more properly before starting writing in English, OK?
Respectfully, M.

Миланна Винтхальтер   06.02.2008 09:42     Заявить о нарушении