Some advice

An intriguin' plot and a belief in a happy happy ending, motivates you to read this goddamn shit from cover to cover, but with no sight of positive result or any sudden life changin' ideas. All the good stories you knew were never read by you, you were told them. There is a special mystery in what's called "myths" and "legends". Much grippin' is to listen, not to read. Of course, I'm not against readin' at all I just mean that if you've got such a great opportunity to sit with an open mouth following a nice, peaceful and at times furious narration, do it. You will never forget any detail and soon after you retell this story to your closest friend, [maybe not so vivid,but ot the thing - ???]. Actually, what I wanted to say is ['wanted to say was' or 'want to say is'] learn how to listen and practice more, appreciate the word that was given to you, even if at the first sight it seems to be nonsense. That's the right way to go.

If you plan on writing in a dialect, such as the one that swallows "g" in -ing endings, it makes sense to use other features to make it sound more authentic (e.g., "I ain't against readin'").

Дина Беляева   06.01.2010 22:31   •   Заявить о нарушении