Enemy
Which explains the reason why
Even strongest fighters fail,
Even brightest souls die.
Once, long ago, there lived a man
Who was an outstanding knight.
He always told himself "I can",
He loved to fight and lived to fight.
His enemies were falling down
Like grass on scythe under his sword,
And everyone in every town
Admired his steady loud word.
But once the knight began to sink
In sadness, he began to dream,
He watched a torch light up and wink
In thoughts, what was so wrong with him.
He said "I can!" again, again,
But in his heart there was no war,
But only endless heavy pain,
And hopeless dreams. And nothing more.
He couldn't sleep. He couldn't move.
He couldn't eat, and breathe, and speak.
And then, to tell the certain truth,
All victories he'd earned seemed weak...
Because he met another foe,
That makes it all look black and white,
And no one ever could before
Escape from it, though many tried.
This killing foe he couldn't beat.
It like a torment hung above.
This enemy all people...need.
The name for enemy was Love.
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Escape from it, though many tried."
I could.(
Шахматист 08.04.2010 22:39 Заявить о нарушении
(may be just a lil bit) still regret something or that you're still sad about it..
Антонина Романова 08.04.2010 23:31 Заявить о нарушении
Still regret something.
And sad a little bit.
Keep going on!
I mean, you personally.)
Шахматист 09.04.2010 22:25 Заявить о нарушении
I really try. I swear.
Антонина Романова 10.04.2010 00:19 Заявить о нарушении
Changing your personal attitudes, priorities and values.
Don't recommend you to do that at your age.
P.S. Thank you for your trying.)
Шахматист 10.04.2010 00:32 Заявить о нарушении
That's why I'm still under great pressure of feelings
Антонина Романова 10.04.2010 14:48 Заявить о нарушении