Joseph s tower

Construction site. Early morning.
Two Arabs on construction, put on their working clothes, and in their talking abuse Jews in all problems of the world.
The beginner Joseph is brought by car on construction. He is He is wearing a Jewish bale.
He, putting on his working clothes, hears conversation of the new partners. He removes a bale, hides it in a pocket.
The Arabs get acquainted with the beginner. He tells them, that his name is Jusuf and he is refugee from Central Asia. Those are glad, and they are shearing with him their attitude to the Jews. Joseph prefers not to speak.
Everyone begin to work - build a bearing column of the future house. The Arabs continue to discuss the favorite theme and that business distracts them from work.
Joseph notices a mistake of the Arabs, because of which the house can fall. All together they correct it.
Director of construction comes - he is pleased with result, pays all. He pays in addition, above normal fee. Leaves.
The Arabs shake a Joseph’s hand, they give him back money that director has given them above normal.
Joseph refuses. Everyone remove working closes. The Arabs leave. Joseph calls them:
« By the way, my name is not Jusuf, but Joseph! » - he dresses a bale. Goes from construction.
The Arabs stand having opened mouths.
Joseph goes further, proud.
Sharp hail behind: « Hey, Jew! ».
Joseph stops. His hand involuntarily lasts to a bale. He slowly turns.
The Arabs smile.
« Listen, Joseph, excuse! »
They shake each other hands.


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I liked this piece of literature. The manner of writing is good. I have read it very quickly and I have decided that it appeals to me due to its acuteness. The relations between the Arabs and the Jews is a modern topic. Thank you kindly.

Светлана Барашко   12.08.2010 09:15     Заявить о нарушении
Спасибо, Светлана. Это странно, что мои короткие синопсисы, которые я записываю как планы к снятию фильмов, могут быть восприняты как самостоятельные произведения. Интересно. Ведь здесь все сухо. Только действия... (?)
В любом случае, благодаря вашей оценке, можно взглянуть на них чуть по другому.

Лена Ибрагимова   13.08.2010 00:52   Заявить о нарушении
Конечно, можно.

Светлана Барашко   13.08.2010 10:17   Заявить о нарушении
can you check this one? http://www.proza.ru/2010/07/16/210
I have red some of your stories developing fantasy world, I like your way, and I wonder what's your thought about this staf.

Лена Ибрагимова   14.08.2010 00:30   Заявить о нарушении
I appreciate this literary piece. Especially I liked the language. The image of Dan is very vivid. There are many philosophical thoughts which give some kind of value to your piece.Thanks.

Светлана Барашко   17.08.2010 12:01   Заявить о нарушении
Thank you very much, Svetlana!

Лена Ибрагимова   17.08.2010 12:17   Заявить о нарушении