The happiness

How to get to the happiness,
Driving at right or left,
Planning at North or South,
Searching or waiting yet?

Confusing your name at beginning,
I don’t understand from now
How I couldn’t help hearing –
Your name – is the happiness' sound…


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Thank you very much, Татьяна. :).
I think use of possessive 's in the word "happiness's" looks kind of massive...

If you mean "sound of happiness" - I would write it just like "happiness' sound" as usual for plurals or words ending with letter "s". But usage of construction "ss's" is OK since it is not prohibited and some authors insist on using this form for example in "boss's", "hostess's", etc. In those cases you can almost hear "bossEs", "hostessEs"... But in your verse/rhyme - it's not the case.

http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/nouns-possessive.htm

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/possessives.htm

Thanks again. :).

Ярослав Вал   07.07.2011 04:44     Заявить о нарушении
Thank you !
I've corrected)))

Татьяна Куликова -Ильина   07.07.2011 21:50   Заявить о нарушении
Sure thing... Cool and all the best. Take care of yourself. :).

Ярослав Вал   07.07.2011 22:29   Заявить о нарушении