Snow
Hurrying for their sins and pain
Striving to make new mistakes
And pouring on sinner's heads grey rain
This rain cant wash off all the dirtiness
Grey and boring,its loveless
And I close my eyes
Praying about forgiveness.
And I want the snow to cover trees
And I want it to cover your sins
With white virgin shroud
Return to you child's dreams
And I want the snow...
And I want the snow...
Dirtiness...its everywhere
And rain makes it only worse
People haven't stayed in the street
It's the huge sacrifice
I lift my head and feel
How tears fall from the sky,so slow
But wind changes them into ice
And I'm sorry that it isn't the snow
I'm sorry that it isn't the snow
And I want the snow to cover trees
And I want it to cover your sins
With white virgin shroud
Return to you child's dreams
And I want the snow...
And I want the snow...
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Hurrying
to make new mistakes
sinners' heads
makes it only worse
Sacrifice
I'm lifting head and feel but better raising otherwise it feels like you take your head in your arms and lifted it.
wind changes
and some minor apostrophe but that's nothing.
i liked this one as well. it has the atmosphere. Leonard Cohen atmosphere.
Динозавр Дэнвер 25.08.2011 20:06 Заявить о нарушении
Good to your creation:)
Лестат Лионкур 25.08.2011 20:48 Заявить о нарушении