This young miss
Forever with
Her single dreams
Which promises
Her love eclipse
When kiss on lips
When fortune wins
When feelings gives
Herself white wings
When every piece
Inside just brings
The diamond sparks
Which glistens in the
Brightest icy eyes
For getting to the
Fragile brilliant surprise
And name for this
The gentle prince.
Love eclipse
© Copyright: Юльца Муза, 2011
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:))Pretty, Miss, I wish, you to find, to meet your prince and hope you`ve found him. And keep this diamond everyday and everytime. Be happy in your life always Amen
Exelent! It`s very good to see, you can write such beauteful verse, using the language of Shakespeare.
With my best wishes
Sincerely
Исмаил Дагестани 13.10.2011 14:43 • Заявить о нарушении
Exelent! It`s very good to see, you can write such beauteful verse, using the language of Shakespeare.
With my best wishes
Sincerely
Исмаил Дагестани 13.10.2011 14:43 • Заявить о нарушении
Really? Is it language of Shakespeare?
I wrote it and it was voice of soul.
Юльца Муза 13.10.2011 23:26 Заявить о нарушении
I wrote it and it was voice of soul.
Юльца Муза 13.10.2011 23:26 Заявить о нарушении
I meant the english language by saying about Shakespeare:) Happy to see you able to think and speak about your feelings in foreign language.
With greatings
Исмаил Дагестани 14.10.2011 14:45 Заявить о нарушении
With greatings
Исмаил Дагестани 14.10.2011 14:45 Заявить о нарушении
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