You leave like a train

Трибьют песни "Ты уходишь, как поезд" на слова Е.Евтушенко и музыку М.Таривердиева, к кинофильму М.Калика (1968) "Любить". Переведено на украинский, французский, итальянский и английский языки. Первоначальная музыка представлена в инструментальной теме (в начале), в начале, после дана вольная аранжировка трибьюта к песне (вклюяая на остальных языках) и вариант близкий к оригинальному звучанию.

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[Title: You leave like a train]
[Style: Vintage chanson, cinematic orchestral ballad, poetic storytelling]
[Tempo: Slow, pensive]
[Key: Original tonal center of the composition]
[Instrumentation: Piano, strings (violins, violas, cellos), double bass]

[Intro: Melancholic piano arpeggios, string introduction]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]

[Verse 1: Piano plays main theme, strings enter with light counterpoint]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
[Melody: The main theme reflecting the motive of the song]

[Instrumental Bridge: Soloing Violin with Piano Support]
[Chords: Ab – Eb – Bb – Ab]
[Melody: Variations on the main theme]

[Verse 2: Introduction of the cello, then all the strings enter]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
[Melody: Development of the main theme, addition of counterpoint]

[Chorus: Full ensemble, dynamic performance]
[Chords: Ab – Eb – Bb – Ab]
[Melody: Climax of the theme, emotional uplift]

[Instrumental: Piano solo, then string introduction]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
[Melody: Refrain, repetition of the main theme]

[Verse 3: Smooth deceleration, piano and strings in soft dynamic performance]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
[Melody: Final variation of the theme]

[Outro: Gradual fade, piano ends on the last chord]
[Chords: Cm]
[Melody: Final note, smoothly fading]

[Production Notes: Preservation of original harmony and melody, use of soft and expressive dynamics timbres of instruments to convey the emotional depth of the composition.]

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Не варто.

Не варто,
Мені любити тебе не варто,
Ти йдеш, як потяг,
Потяг, потяг.
І одна на пероні
Дощ та я.
Ні, не плакати, дощ, не плакати!
Хай я поплачу за тебе.

Вітер,
Він мене розуміє,
Він мене обіймає,
Вітер, вітер, вітер.
Він, як я на пероні,
Одинокий.
Бога немає!
Бога немає!
Є лише поїзд, але він далекий.

Не варто,
Мені сподіватися на стоп-крани,
Пізно, не варто, не варто...
А потяг, потяг уже вдалині,
Його не повернеш.

Рейки,
Ви так тягнетесь, рейки,
Ви так тягнетесь, рейки,
Рейки, рейки, рейки.
У цьому потязі тільки
Немає місця для мене.
Лише у долоні
Листя осіннє,
Аркуш осінній, як мій квиток.

Не варто,
Мені сподіватися на стоп-крани,
Пізно, ге варто, не варто,
А потяг, потяг уже вдалині,
Його не повернеш.

Не варто,
Мені любити тебе не варто,
Ти йдеш, як потяг,
Потяг, потяг, потяг...

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[Title: You leave like a train]
[Style: Vintage chanson, cinematic orchestral ballad, poetic storytelling]
[Tempo: Slow, pensive]
[Key: Cm]
[Instrumentation: Piano, strings (violins, violas, cellos), double bass]

[Intro: Melancholic piano arpeggios, string introduction]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]

[Verse 1: Piano plays main theme, strings enter with light counterpoint]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
[Melody: The main theme reflecting the motive of the song]

[Text:
Не варто,
Мені любити тебе не варто,
Ти йдеш, як потяг,
Потяг, потяг.
І одна на пероні
Дощ та я.
Ні, не плакати, дощ, не плакати!
Хай я поплачу за тебе.]

[Instrumental Bridge: Soloing Violin with Piano Support]
[Chords: Ab – Eb – Bb – Ab]
[Melody: Variations on the main theme]

[Verse 2: Cello introduction, then all strings enter]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
[Melody: Development of the main theme, addition of counterpoint]

[Text:
Вітер,
Він мене розуміє,
Він мене обіймає,
Вітер, вітер, вітер.
Він, як я на пероні,
Одинокий.
Бога немає!
Бога немає!
Є лише поїзд, але він далекий.]

[Chorus: Full ensemble, dynamic performance]
[Chords: Ab – Eb – Bb – Ab]
[Melody: Climax of the theme, emotional uplift]

[Instrumental: Piano solo, then string introduction]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
[Melody: Refrain, repetition of the main theme]

[Verse 3: Smooth deceleration, piano and strings in soft dynamic performance]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
[Melody: Final variation of the theme]

[Text:
Не варто,
Мені сподіватися на стоп-крани,
Пізно, не варто, не варто...
А потяг, потяг уже вдалині,
Його не повернеш.]

[Outro: Gradual fade, piano ends on the last chord]
[Chords: Cm]
[Melody: Final note, smoothly fading]

[Production Notes: Preservation of original harmony and melody, use of soft and expressive dynamics timbres of instruments to convey the emotional depth of the composition.]

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[Title: Не варто]
[Style: Vintage chanson, cinematic orchestral ballad, poetic storytelling]
[Tempo: Moderate, nostalgic]
[Key: Original key of the composition]
[Vocal: Soft, expressive female voice with melancholic intonation]

[Intro: Soft orchestral strings, distant melancholic piano arpeggios, subtle tremolo on violins]
[Cm]

[Verse 1: Deep, emotional male vocal]
[Cm] Не варто,
[G] Мені любити тебе не варто,
[Fm] Ти йдеш, як потяг,
[Cm] Потяг, потяг.
[Cm] І одна на пероні
[G] Дощ та я.
[Fm] Ні, не плакати, дощ, не плакати!
[Cm] Хай я поплачу за тебе.

[Instrumental Bridge: Clarinet solo, soft accordion background, subtle vibraphone notes]
[Cm] – [G] – [Fm] – [Cm]

[Verse 2: Crescendo in strings, female backing vocals echoing last words]
[Cm] Вітер,
[G] Він мене розуміє,
[Fm] Він мене обіймає,
[Cm] Вітер, вітер, вітер.
[Cm] Він, як я на пероні,
[G] Одинокий.
[Fm] Бога немає!
[Cm] Бога немає!
[Fm] Є лише поїзд, але він далекий.

[Chorus: Full orchestration, deep brass, rolling toms, expressive legato vocals]
[Cm] Не варто,
[G] Мені сподіватися на стоп-крани,
[Fm] Пізно, не варто, не варто…
[Cm] А потяг, потяг уже вдалині,
[G] Його не повернеш.

[Instrumental: Violin solo, accordion harmony, deep contrabass plucking]
[Cm] – [G] – [Fm] – [Cm]

[Verse 3: Softer vocal tone, flute doubling melody]
[Cm] Рейки,
[G] Ви так тягнетесь, рейки,
[Fm] Ви так тягнетесь, рейки,
[Cm] Рейки, рейки, рейки.
[Cm] У цьому потязі тільки
[G] Немає місця для мене.
[Fm] Лише у долоні
[Cm] Листя осіннє,
[Fm] Аркуш осінній, як мій квиток.

[Chorus: Dramatic strings, expressive rubato, distant choir harmonizing]
[Cm] Не варто,
[G] Мені сподіватися на стоп-крани,
[Fm] Пізно, не варто, не варто,
[Cm] А потяг, потяг уже вдалині,
[G] Його не повернеш.

[Outro: Decrescendo, solo piano fading, last violin note lingering in silence]
[Production Notes: Nostalgic, cinematic sound, authentic vintage chanson and orchestral ballad style, deep reverberation on vocals, warm analog tape effect]

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Ne vaux pas

Ne vaux pas,
M’aimer, tu ne vaux pas.
Tu pars, comme un train,
Un train, un train.
Et moi seule sur le quai,
Sous la pluie.
Non, ne pleure pas, pluie, ne pleure pas !
Laisse-moi pleurer pour toi.

Le vent,
Il me comprend,
Il me serre dans ses bras,
Le vent, le vent, le vent.
Il est seul,
Comme moi sur le quai.
Il n’y a pas de Dieu !
Il n’y a pas de Dieu !
Il n’y a qu’un train, mais il est si loin.

Ne vaux pas,
Esp;rer freiner le voyage,
Trop tard, ne vaux pas, ne vaux pas...
Et le train, le train s’;loigne d;j;,
On ne le retient pas.

Les rails,
Comme ils s’;tirent, les rails,
Comme ils s’;tirent, les rails,
Les rails, les rails, les rails.
Mais dans ce train-l;,
Il n’y a pas de place pour moi.
Seule dans ma main,
Une feuille d’automne,
Une feuille fan;e, comme mon billet.

Ne vaux pas,
Esp;rer freiner le voyage,
Trop tard, ne vaux pas, ne vaux pas,
Et le train, le train s’;loigne d;j;,
On ne le retient pas.

Ne vaux pas,
M’aimer, tu ne vaux pas,
Tu pars, comme un train,
Un train, un train, un train...

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[Title: Ne vaux pas]
[Style: Vintage chanson, cinematic orchestral ballad, poetic storytelling]
[Tempo: Moderate, nostalgic]
[Key: Original key of the composition]
[Vocal: Soft, expressive female voice with melancholic intonation]

[Intro: Soft orchestral strings, distant melancholic piano arpeggios, subtle tremolo on violins]
[Cm]

[Verse 1: Gentle yet emotional female vocal]
[Cm] Ne vaux pas,
[G] M’aimer, tu ne vaux pas.
[Fm] Tu pars, comme un train,
[Cm] Un train, un train.
[Cm] Et moi seule sur le quai,
[G] Sous la pluie.
[Fm] Non, ne pleure pas, pluie, ne pleure pas !
[Cm] Laisse-moi pleurer pour toi.

[Instrumental Bridge: Clarinet solo, soft accordion background, subtle vibraphone notes]
[Cm] – [G] – [Fm] – [Cm]

[Verse 2: Crescendo in strings, female backing vocals echoing last words]
[Cm] Le vent,
[G] Il me comprend,
[Fm] Il me serre dans ses bras,
[Cm] Le vent, le vent, le vent.
[Cm] Il est seul,
[G] Comme moi sur le quai.
[Fm] Il n’y a pas de Dieu !
[Cm] Il n’y a pas de Dieu !
[Fm] Il n’y a qu’un train, mais il est si loin.

[Chorus: Full orchestration, deep brass, rolling toms, expressive legato vocals]
[Cm] Ne vaux pas,
[G] Esp;rer freiner le voyage,
[Fm] Trop tard, ne vaux pas, ne vaux pas...
[Cm] Et le train, le train s’;loigne d;j;,
[G] On ne le retient pas.

[Instrumental: Violin solo, accordion harmony, deep contrabass plucking]
[Cm] – [G] – [Fm] – [Cm]

[Verse 3: Softer vocal tone, flute doubling melody]
[Cm] Les rails,
[G] Comme ils s’;tirent, les rails,
[Fm] Comme ils s’;tirent, les rails,
[Cm] Les rails, les rails, les rails.
[Cm] Mais dans ce train-l;,
[G] Il n’y a pas de place pour moi.
[Fm] Seule dans ma main,
[Cm] Une feuille d’automne,
[Fm] Une feuille fan;e, comme mon billet.

[Chorus: Dramatic strings, expressive rubato, distant choir harmonizing]
[Cm] Ne vaux pas,
[G] Esp;rer freiner le voyage,
[Fm] Trop tard, ne vaux pas, ne vaux pas,
[Cm] Et le train, le train s’;loigne d;j;,
[G] On ne le retient pas.

[Outro: Decrescendo, solo piano fading, last violin note lingering in silence]
[Production Notes: Nostalgic, cinematic sound, authentic vintage chanson and orchestral ballad style, deep reverberation on vocals, warm analog tape effect]

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Non vale.

Non vale,
Amarti, non vale.
Tu vai, come un treno,
Un treno, un treno.
E io sola sul binario,
Sotto la pioggia.
No, non piangere, pioggia, non piangere!
Lascia piangere me per te.

Il vento,
Lui mi capisce,
Mi stringe forte,
Il vento, il vento, il vento.
Lui ; solo,
Come me sul binario.
Dio non c’;!
Dio non c’;!
C’; solo il treno, ma ; cos; lontano.

Non vale,
Sperare di fermarlo,
Troppo tardi, non vale, non vale…
E il treno, il treno ; gi; lontano,
Non lo riprenderai.

Le rotaie,
Come corrono, le rotaie,
Come corrono, le rotaie,
Le rotaie, le rotaie, le rotaie.

Ma su quel treno,
Non c’; posto per me.
Solo nella mia mano,
Una foglia d’autunno,
Una foglia caduta, come il mio biglietto.

Non vale,
Sperare di fermarlo,
Troppo tardi, non vale, non vale…
E il treno, il treno ; gi; lontano,
Non lo riprenderai.

Non vale,
Amarti, non vale,
Tu vai, come un treno,
Un treno, un treno, un treno…

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[Title: Non vale]
[Style: Vintage chanson, cinematic orchestral ballad, poetic storytelling]
[Tempo: Moderate, nostalgic]
[Key: Original key of the composition]
[Vocal: Soft, expressive female voice with melancholic intonation]

[Intro: Soft orchestral strings, distant melancholic piano arpeggios, subtle tremolo on violins]
[Cm]

[Verse 1: Gentle yet emotional female vocal]
[Cm] Non vale,
[G] Amarti, non vale.
[Fm] Tu vai, come un treno,
[Cm] Un treno, un treno.
[Cm] E io sola sul binario,
[G] Sotto la pioggia.
[Fm] No, non piangere, pioggia, non piangere!
[Cm] Lascia piangere me per te.

[Instrumental Bridge: Clarinet solo, soft accordion background, subtle vibraphone notes]
[Cm] – [G] – [Fm] – [Cm]

[Verse 2: Crescendo in strings, female backing vocals echoing last words]
[Cm] Il vento,
[G] Lui mi capisce,
[Fm] Mi stringe forte,
[Cm] Il vento, il vento, il vento.
[Cm] Lui ; solo,
[G] Come me sul binario.
[Fm] Dio non c’;!
[Cm] Dio non c’;!
[Fm] C’; solo il treno, ma ; cos; lontano.

[Chorus: Full orchestration, deep brass, rolling toms, expressive legato vocals]
[Cm] Non vale,
[G] Sperare di fermarlo,
[Fm] Troppo tardi, non vale, non vale...
[Cm] E il treno, il treno ; gi; lontano,
[G] Non lo riprenderai.

[Instrumental: Violin solo, accordion harmony, deep contrabass plucking]
[Cm] – [G] – [Fm] – [Cm]

[Verse 3: Softer vocal tone, flute doubling melody]
[Cm] Le rotaie,
[G] Come corrono, le rotaie,
[Fm] Come corrono, le rotaie,
[Cm] Le rotaie, le rotaie, le rotaie.
[Cm] Ma su quel treno,
[G] Non c’; posto per me.
[Fm] Solo nella mia mano,
[Cm] Una foglia d’autunno,
[Fm] Una foglia caduta, come il mio biglietto.

[Chorus: Dramatic strings, expressive rubato, distant choir harmonizing]
[Cm] Non vale,
[G] Sperare di fermarlo,
[Fm] Troppo tardi, non vale, non vale,
[Cm] E il treno, il treno ; gi; lontano,
[G] Non lo riprenderai.

[Outro: Decrescendo, solo piano fading, last violin note lingering in silence]
[Production Notes: Nostalgic, cinematic sound, authentic vintage chanson and orchestral ballad style, deep reverberation on vocals, warm analog tape effect]

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[Title: Non vale]
[Style: Vintage chanson, cinematic orchestral ballad, poetic storytelling]
[Tempo: Moderate, nostalgic]
[Key: Original key of the composition]
[Vocal style: Soft, expressive female voice with melancholic intonation]

[Intro: Soft orchestral strings, distant melancholic piano arpeggios, subtle tremolo on violins]
[Chords: Cm]

[Verse 1: Gentle yet emotional female vocal]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
Lyrics:
Non vale,
Amarti, non vale.
Tu vai, come un treno,
Un treno, un treno.
E io sola sul binario,
Sotto la pioggia.
No, non piangere, pioggia, non piangere!
Lascia piangere me per te.

[Instrumental Bridge: Clarinet solo, soft accordion background, subtle vibraphone notes]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]

[Verse 2: Crescendo in strings, female backing vocals echoing last words]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
Lyrics:
Il vento,
Lui mi capisce,
Mi stringe forte,
Il vento, il vento, il vento.
Lui ; solo,
Come me sul binario.
Dio non c’;!
Dio non c’;!
C’; solo il treno, ma ; cos; lontano.

[Chorus: Full orchestration, deep brass, rolling toms, expressive legato vocals]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm – G]
Lyrics:
Non vale,
Sperare di fermarlo,
Troppo tardi, non vale, non vale...
E il treno, il treno ; gi; lontano,
Non lo riprenderai.

[Instrumental: Violin solo, accordion harmony, deep contrabass plucking]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]

[Verse 3: Softer vocal tone, flute doubling melody]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
Lyrics:
Le rotaie,
Come corrono, le rotaie,
Come corrono, le rotaie,
Le rotaie, le rotaie, le rotaie.
Ma su quel treno,
Non c’; posto per me.
Solo nella mia mano,
Una foglia d’autunno,
Una foglia caduta, come il mio biglietto.

[Chorus: Dramatic strings, expressive rubato, distant choir harmonizing]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm – G]
Lyrics:
Non vale,
Sperare di fermarlo,
Troppo tardi, non vale, non vale,
E il treno, il treno ; gi; lontano,
Non lo riprenderai.

[Outro: Decrescendo, solo piano fading, last violin note lingering in silence]
[Production Notes: Nostalgic, cinematic sound, authentic vintage chanson and orchestral ballad style, deep reverberation on vocals, warm analog tape effect]

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Not Worth It.

Not worth it,
To love you, not worth it.
You leave like a train,
A train, a train.
And I stand all alone,
In the rain.
No, don’t cry, rain, don’t cry!
Let me cry instead of you.

The wind,
It understands me,
It embraces me,
The wind, the wind, the wind.
It’s alone,
Like me at the station.
There’s no God!
There’s no God!
Only a train, but it’s too far away.

Not worth it,
To hope for an emergency brake,
Too late, not worth it, not worth it…
And the train, the train is far away now,
You won’t bring it back.

The rails,
How they stretch on, the rails,
How they stretch on, the rails,
The rails, the rails, the rails.
And on that train,
There is no place for me.
Only in my palm,
An autumn leaf,
A fallen leaf, just like my ticket.

Not worth it,
To hope for an emergency brake,
Too late, not worth it, not worth it…
And the train, the train is far away now,
You won’t bring it back.

Not worth it,
To love you, not worth it,
You leave like a train,
A train, a train, a train…

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[Title: Not Worth It]
[Style: Vintage chanson, cinematic orchestral ballad, poetic storytelling]
[Tempo: Moderate, nostalgic]
[Key: Original key of the composition]
[Vocal style: Soft, expressive female voice with melancholic intonation]

[Intro: Soft orchestral strings, distant melancholic piano arpeggios, subtle tremolo on violins]
[Chords: Cm]

[Verse 1: Gentle yet emotional female vocal]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
Lyrics:
Not worth it,
To love you, not worth it.
You leave like a train,
A train, a train.
And I stand all alone,
In the rain.
No, don’t cry, rain, don’t cry!
Let me cry instead of you.

[Instrumental Bridge: Clarinet solo, soft accordion background, subtle vibraphone notes]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]

[Verse 2: Crescendo in strings, female backing vocals echoing last words]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
Lyrics:
The wind,
It understands me,
It embraces me,
The wind, the wind, the wind.
It’s alone,
Like me at the station.
There’s no God!
There’s no God!
Only a train, but it’s too far away.

[Chorus: Full orchestration, deep brass, rolling toms, expressive legato vocals]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm – G]
Lyrics:
Not worth it,
To hope for an emergency brake,
Too late, not worth it, not worth it…
And the train, the train is far away now,
You won’t bring it back.

[Instrumental: Violin solo, accordion harmony, deep contrabass plucking]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]

[Verse 3: Softer vocal tone, flute doubling melody]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm]
Lyrics:
The rails,
How they stretch on, the rails,
How they stretch on, the rails,
The rails, the rails, the rails.
And on that train,
There is no place for me.
Only in my palm,
An autumn leaf,
A fallen leaf, just like my ticket.

[Chorus: Dramatic strings, expressive rubato, distant choir harmonizing]
[Chords: Cm – G – Fm – Cm – G]
Lyrics:
Not worth it,
To hope for an emergency brake,
Too late, not worth it, not worth it…
And the train, the train is far away now,
You won’t bring it back.

[Outro: Decrescendo, solo piano fading, last violin note lingering in silence]
[Production Notes: Nostalgic, cinematic sound, authentic vintage chanson and orchestral ballad style, deep reverberation on vocals, warm analog tape effect]

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