Сквозь времена

Проберусь к тебе мышкой серою,
Помогу я своей милой «Золушке».
Ночкой тихою, тропкой укромною,
Соберу для неё, всё по зёрнышку.

А оставлю коль что несобранным,
От того ли, что мне причитается? —
Небеса дней давно уж разобраны. —
Умолчу о том, не всё сбывается…

Не я один здесь, ты там не одна…
К себе другому, к тебе другой,
Сквозь расстояния и времена,
Несу груз в вечность тёмной водой.

Не всё к полуночи нам случается,
И от того, всегда, во все времена,
Каждый по своему улыбается,
Но отражает свет всё та-же луна.

Ах, послушай, послушай, милая —
Сердце бьётся одно мгновение.
В нем поймёшь ты, моя любимая,
Что в забвении — откровение.

Ах, подумай, подумай, грешная —
Боль хранишь ты, добро забывая;
А моя голова безутешная
Пламя помнит, других остужая.

А коль спросишь, засеяв "Зёрнышко". —
Светит что, мой путь освещая. —
Я отвечу, — не знаю, солнышко.
И прижму к груди тебя тающей.

            ~ @& ~

Первые четыре катрена ~ @& ~ (17.06.2023),
Последние три катрена ~ @& ~  (30.01.1991)
Посвящается одной, когда-то  светловолосой девочке,
чьи волосы снег выбелил и оставил светлыми на все времена...

Перевелен на английский и выполнен в формате песни (15.12.2025)

Progressive House, Melodic Techno, Epic Trance, 128 BPM, 4/4, male lead baritone, rich low-mid, resonant mid, expressive dynamics, melodic phrasing strictly followed, legato with subtle articulation, cinematic, foreground presence, never replaced by instruments; drums drive medium-tempo waves (124–130 BPM), kick soft, melodic toms, sparse hi-hats, alternating breaks; lead vocal and synths follow half-tempo phrasing; pads and spatial textures evolve ~4; slower, cinematic fills, airy atmospheres, delay/reverb automated per phrase, wide stereo depth; bass hybrid electric/synth, melodic, syncopated, works with drums, supports chord movement without masking vocals; guitars atmospheric, delay + phaser; dynamic rise/fall, trance-like peaks, gentle resolutions, hypnotic, immersive, spacious, cinematic, tension and release, accentuated vocal windows during drum pauses, harmonic richness, airy textures.

(русскоязычная версия)

https://suno.com/s/TgCKI5fsbyTtEjUJ
https://suno.com/s/EtwohCvl8LZFpapf

[GENRE: progressive house, melodic techno, epic trance]
[TEMPO MUSIC: 128 BPM | TEMPO VOCAL: 64 BPM | TIME SIGNATURE: 4/4]
[KEY: E minor]

[VOCAL STYLE: male lead baritone, warm and deep timbre, clear diction, smooth legato, emotional but controlled delivery, cinematic intimacy, stable pitch, no vocal chops, no effects replacing words, vocal always foreground]

[MELODIC FRAME (GLOBAL)]
[VERSE MELODY — used for all verses:
E4–G4–B4–A4 | G4–A4–B4–D5 | B4–A4–G4–E4 | D4–E4–G4–A4]
[CHORUS MELODY — identical each chorus:
G4–B4–D5–E5 | E5–F#5–G5–B5 | B4–C5–D5–F#5 | A4–B4–D5–E5]

[DRUMS: 808-based kit, soft rounded kick with low transient, no aggressive punch, groove-based rhythm instead of straight four-on-the-floor, sparse hi-hats with texture not brightness, melodic tom accents used as phrasing support, pauses and air between hits, drums always secondary to vocal and harmony ]

[BASS: Hybrid 808 + electric bass, deep but controlled, melodic and syncopated, locked tightly with kick without pumping, supports chord movement, avoids low-mid masking of vocal, smooth note transitions, no distortion dominance ]

[PADS & SYNTHS: Wide evolving pads with slow attack, harmonic carrier across sections, subtle filter movement, no rhythmic stabbing, supporting emotional arc, airy high frequencies without harshness ]

[GUITARS: Atmospheric textures only, delay + phaser, sustained harmonic layers, no groove-driving patterns ]

[STRUCTURE]

[INTRO — 8 bars | pads, subtle textures | no drums | no vocal]

[VERSE 1 — 16 bars | Chords: Em(add9) – Cmaj7 – G – Dsus2 | vocal lead, pads, bass, minimal percussion]
Проберусь к тебе мышкой серою,
Помогу я своей милой «Золушке».
Ночкой тихою, тропкой укромною,
Соберу для неё, всё по зёрнышку.

[VERSE 2 — 16 bars | same chords | vocal lead, pads, bass variation, light tom accents]
А оставлю коль что несобранным,
От того ли, что мне причитается? —
Небеса дней давно уж разобраны. —
Умолчу о том, не всё сбывается…

[CHORUS — 16 bars | Chords: G – D – Em – Cadd9 | widened pads, melodic bass, restrained drums]
Не я один здесь, ты там не одна…
К себе другому, к тебе другой,
Сквозь расстояния и времена,
Несу груз в вечность тёмной водой.

[VERSE 3 — 16 bars | simplified bass, minimal drums]
Not everything comes by midnight’s call,
Yet always, in every time and place,
Each one smiles in their own way,
While the same moon holds its light in space.

[VERSE 4 — 16 bars | guitar textures added]
Ах, послушай, послушай, милая —
Сердце бьётся одно мгновение.
В нем поймёшь ты, моя любимая,
Что в забвении — откровение.

[CHORUS — 16 bars | Chords: G – D – Em – Cadd9 | widened pads, melodic bass, restrained drums]
Не я один здесь, ты там не одна…
К себе другому, к тебе другой,
Сквозь расстояния и времена,
Несу груз в вечность тёмной водой.

[VERSE 5 — 16 bars | darker pads, bass restrained]
Ах, подумай, подумай, грешная —
Боль хранишь ты, добро забывая;
А моя голова безутешная
Пламя помнит, других остужая.

[VERSE 6 — 16 bars | pads thinning, bass sparse]
А коль спросишь, засеяв "Зёрнышко". —
Светит что, мой путь освещая. —
Я отвечу, — не знаю, солнышко.
И прижму к груди тебя тающей.

[CHORUS — 16 bars | Chords: G – D – Em – Cadd9 | widened pads, melodic bass, restrained drums]
Не я один здесь, ты там не одна…
К себе другому, к тебе другой,
Сквозь расстояния и времена,
Несу груз в вечность тёмной водой.

[OUTRO — 8 bars | pads, textures, vocal tail | no drums]

[POST-PRODUCTION:
Vocal always centered and dominant, clean articulation priority, stereo depth built with pads and guitars, minimal sidechain only for clarity, no over-compression, dynamic range preserved, reverb and delay automated per vocal phrase, transparent cinematic mix ]

(Англоязычная версия)

https://suno.com/s/l0oj1idjo64ZGawM
https://suno.com/s/krM7Z2SyDqHVOIoe

[GENRE: progressive house, melodic techno, epic trance]
[TEMPO MUSIC: 128 BPM | TEMPO VOCAL: 64 BPM | TIME SIGNATURE: 4/4]
[KEY: E minor]

[VOCAL STYLE: male lead baritone, warm and deep timbre, clear diction, smooth legato, emotional but controlled delivery, cinematic intimacy, stable pitch, no vocal chops, no effects replacing words, vocal always foreground]

[MELODIC FRAME (GLOBAL)]
[VERSE MELODY — used for all verses:
E4–G4–B4–A4 | G4–A4–B4–D5 | B4–A4–G4–E4 | D4–E4–G4–A4]
[CHORUS MELODY — identical each chorus:
G4–B4–D5–E5 | E5–F#5–G5–B5 | B4–C5–D5–F#5 | A4–B4–D5–E5]

[DRUMS: 808-based kit, soft rounded kick with low transient, no aggressive punch, groove-based rhythm instead of straight four-on-the-floor, sparse hi-hats with texture not brightness, melodic tom accents used as phrasing support, pauses and air between hits, drums always secondary to vocal and harmony ]

[BASS: Hybrid 808 + electric bass, deep but controlled, melodic and syncopated, locked tightly with kick without pumping, supports chord movement, avoids low-mid masking of vocal, smooth note transitions, no distortion dominance ]

[PADS & SYNTHS: Wide evolving pads with slow attack, harmonic carrier across sections, subtle filter movement, no rhythmic stabbing, supporting emotional arc, airy high frequencies without harshness ]

[GUITARS: Atmospheric textures only, delay + phaser, sustained harmonic layers, no groove-driving patterns ]

[STRUCTURE]

[INTRO — 8 bars | pads, subtle textures | no drums | no vocal]

[VERSE 1 — 16 bars | Chords: Em(add9) – Cmaj7 – G – Dsus2 | vocal lead, pads, bass, minimal percussion]
I’ll creep to you, a soft gray shadow,
Helping my dear one, my Cinderella,
Through the quiet night along a hidden path,
I gather every tiny grain for her.

[VERSE 2 — 16 bars | same chords | vocal lead, pads, bass variation, light tom accents]
And leave behind what stays uncollected,
Whether it’s mine — I won’t demand,
The days’ heavens long since sorted,
I stay silent — not all comes to hand.

[CHORUS — 16 bars | Chords: G – D – Em – Cadd9 | widened pads, melodic bass, restrained drums]
I am alone here, you are alone there,
To my changed self I carry my care,
Through distance and time, through all that flows,
I bear this weight where dark water goes.

[VERSE 3 — 16 bars | simplified bass, minimal drums]
Not everything comes by midnight’s call,
Yet always, in every time and place,
Each one smiles in their own way,
While the same moon holds its light in space.

[VERSE 4 — 16 bars | guitar textures added]
Ah, listen closely, listen, my dear,
The heart beats for a fleeting span,
Within that moment you will hear
That oblivion reveals what can.

[CHORUS — 16 bars | same as before]

[VERSE 5 — 16 bars | darker pads, bass restrained]
Ah, think it through, think softly now,
You hold your pain, forgetting the rest,
My restless mind recalls the flame
That cools all others — spares your chest.

[VERSE 6 — 16 bars | pads thinning, bass sparse]
And if you ask, having sown that seed,
What light now shows the way ahead,
I’ll answer — I don’t know, my sun,
And press you close, trembling, instead.

[CHORUS — 16 bars]

[OUTRO — 8 bars | pads, textures, vocal tail | no drums]

[POST-PRODUCTION:
Vocal always centered and dominant, clean articulation priority, stereo depth built with pads and guitars, minimal sidechain only for clarity, no over-compression, dynamic range preserved, reverb and delay automated per vocal phrase, transparent cinematic mix ]