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Рецензия на «A life in fear. Chapter 1-2» (Астория Коллинс)
It's good, rather good!
But still I do not understand why do you use present simple. Isn't it better to use present continuous for showing what you are doing right now?
Or may be past?
I'm just curious!
But I liked it.
If you have questions about grammar, you can write to gata_de_noche@mail.ru (it's my e-mail)
And if you are interested in some stories, you can go to my page and read 'Being the Heartless. The Diary'. It's in English.
Гатита 13.10.2011 12:57 • Заявить о нарушении
It's good, rather good!
But still I do not understand why do you use present simple. Isn't it better to use present continuous for showing what you are doing right now?
Or may be past?
I'm just curious!
But I liked it.
If you have questions about grammar, you can write to gata_de_noche@mail.ru (it's my e-mail)
And if you are interested in some stories, you can go to my page and read 'Being the Heartless. The Diary'. It's in English.
Гатита 13.10.2011 12:57 • Заявить о нарушении
Рецензия на «A life in fear. Chapter 1-2» (Астория Коллинс)
Well, but I've red it, and I have done to the end. So, am I the only one, or there was at least somebody else to tell you, that it WAS and it IS interesting?
I have to admit that your English is not bad though I could see that it isn't your native language.
But I have a question (or few), if you want to answer of coarse.
What your soul is screaming about?
And why are you in fear? What do you afraid of?
Роман Углев 06.07.2011 23:46 • Заявить о нарушении
Well, but I've red it, and I have done to the end. So, am I the only one, or there was at least somebody else to tell you, that it WAS and it IS interesting?
I have to admit that your English is not bad though I could see that it isn't your native language.
But I have a question (or few), if you want to answer of coarse.
What your soul is screaming about?
And why are you in fear? What do you afraid of?
Роман Углев 06.07.2011 23:46 • Заявить о нарушении
Thank you for all you wrote. My soul (or soul of my character) is screaming not about but of fear. Don't you have such a felling when you cannot understand what do you afraid of?
Астория Коллинс 12.07.2011 22:03 Заявить о нарушении
Астория Коллинс 12.07.2011 22:03 Заявить о нарушении
If you are still here? Astoria... Sorry, I haven't been here for quite a long time and I didn't know that there is your answer on what I wrote.
This time I've red a second chapter of yours.
Well...
If my reply has any significans for you...
I'm the person who has almost no fear at all. There was a time I had it, but since I met Him I'm not afraid anymore... almost.
I may tell some more if you are willing of coarse.
The last thing for now, the fear you discribing (the one you say about that you don't know what you fear off), is called the fear of darkness. Not the darkness of the dark room, when the light is switched off, but the darkness like someone who is dark inside, and that's why he is that terrible. He doesn't like to be opened in the light. He prefers to stay in darknes to be invisible as much as possible.
He likes dark places in the soul. Yeah... And he likes to be feared of.
But... well, I have a victory over that one too... because I let the Light to come in...
Роман Углев 07.02.2012 23:27 Заявить о нарушении
This time I've red a second chapter of yours.
Well...
If my reply has any significans for you...
I'm the person who has almost no fear at all. There was a time I had it, but since I met Him I'm not afraid anymore... almost.
I may tell some more if you are willing of coarse.
The last thing for now, the fear you discribing (the one you say about that you don't know what you fear off), is called the fear of darkness. Not the darkness of the dark room, when the light is switched off, but the darkness like someone who is dark inside, and that's why he is that terrible. He doesn't like to be opened in the light. He prefers to stay in darknes to be invisible as much as possible.
He likes dark places in the soul. Yeah... And he likes to be feared of.
But... well, I have a victory over that one too... because I let the Light to come in...
Роман Углев 07.02.2012 23:27 Заявить о нарушении