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Рецензия на «Окна закройте - пусть смолкнут поля. Robert Frost» (Ярослав Вал)

As a translation piece, this is quite a nice one.
At one of higher education institutions in the South of Ukraine Robert Frost's poetry was widely promoted by medium and senior lecturers.

He is one of the most brilliant authors whose artistic manner combines depth, the abstract approach to plot- and world- building and flexibility of style.

As a narrator, R.Frost concentrates on being a keen, avid watcher of life's pits and falls, tragedies and miracles.

We cannot tell much about his life circumstances from his poetry, however his approach to artistic narration is remarkable. Robert Frost doesn't presumably use the pronoun 'I' as reference to himself. Perhaps, he crafts several literary heroes, making them similar to people around him or outstanding historic figures he would stumble upon during self-education periods.

Literary criticism is a separate, highly specified field of 'Arts and Humanities' knowledge section, and it should not be infiltrated by terms and methods of vulgar freudism which appears to be outdated in the beginning of the third decade of the 21st century.

Artists, film directors, writers, composers and various other creative class representatives are sometimes hard to decipher by means of widespread theories.
Their personalities obtain numerous sets of behavioral patterns, some of which have ideological basis, while the others are linked to instinctive mechanisms and layers of human nature.

Metamodern aesthetics of the nearest future can possibly shine a light over horrendous events and tragedies, fill people's souls with new clarity and new sincerity, so the mission of creative writing at all levels is to some extent to inspire self-expression, spiritual growth and career development in readers.

Once again, thank you for sharing this translation of yours! It is indeed meaningful and I bet you have much more in stock!

Марина Чиянова   08.06.2021 22:03   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Окна закройте - пусть смолкнут поля. Robert Frost» (Ярослав Вал)

Благородное дело - нести свет просвещения.

Юрий Николаевич Горбачев 2   10.03.2021 19:36   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Окна закройте - пусть смолкнут поля. Robert Frost» (Ярослав Вал)

И этот перевод имеет право быть! Последняя строчка - самая трудная. В переводах и у Вас, и у меня - отсебятина. Но идея - общая. Мы переводим звуковой ряд в зрительный. Спасибо!

Геннадий Казакевич   19.04.2020 03:17   •   Заявить о нарушении

Рецензия на «Окна закройте - пусть смолкнут поля. Robert Frost» (Ярослав Вал)

Мне понравился перевод

Особенно-

..." Так окна закройте, чтоб ветра не слышать, Но увидеть ветра вой"

"Но увидеть ветра вой" - очень поэтично. И прекрасно раскрывает образ.
Не смотря на то, что это не дословный перевод. (But see all wind-stirred.)

Марина Бродская   28.05.2019 21:56   •   Заявить о нарушении