Рецензия на «Sand on the Beach» (Системаизм)
I would translate some parts differently: 1. Two friends were walking barefoot along the beach. 2. The morning sun was pleasantly warm, 3. But towards the noon, the walk was getting more and more uncomfortable. 4. In the morning 5. “The world is changing,” The other replied. “And there’s nothing you can do about it. 6. Look, perhaps you should change along with it, too?” Otherwise, the translation is quite adequate. Good luck, Александр Пахотин 05.10.2015 08:49 • Заявить о нарушении
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